I’ve hit the 42,000 words… and now I’m stuck. I managed to write 500 words this morning… which is a very low, sad number for me.
My problem is that I don’t like my narrative voice… and yes I know this is only my rough do be perfect, but I feel like what I have at the moment is just unacceptable. I need this voice to be just right, it needs that specraft, so it doesn’t have tial something or else the story will not work. The story also needs to be way more descriptive then what it currently is. And I also need a better flow. I know I can do this, but I guess I’m overly frustrated right now, so I’m going to stop for today…and try again tomorrow I guess. =(
Hey at least I’m not being one of those aspiring writers who writes something the first time and believe it is great! =)
I will get this story right!
So if you guys dont mind me asking…
What do you like as far as how a story is told and how the plots and scenes are described to by the narrator?
Comment below, or email me at jgladys5@gmail.com
Thanks,
Gladys
Personally, I enjoy third person narration. But I do like when the narrator describes feelings they have, as well as SOME details of the surroundings and characters (not everything but enough to get a picture.) I could go into much more detail about what I like, but I'm not sure what exactly you're looking for. Email me at laurel.firemeup@gmail.com or contact me by my blog if you want to ask any more!
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